It's funny when you find yourself
Looking from the outside..
I'm standing here but all I want
Is to be over there
Why did I let myself believe
Miracles could happen
Cause now I have to pretend
That I don't really care
I thought you were my fairytale
A dream when I'm not sleeping
A wish upon a star
Thats coming true
But everybody else could tell
That I confused my feelings with the truth
When there was me and you
I swore I knew the melody
That I heard you singing
And when you smiled
You made me feel
Like I could sing along
But then you went and changed the words
Now my heart is empty
I'm only left with used-to-be's
Once upon a song
Now I know you are not a fairytale
And dreams were meant for sleeping
And wishes on a star
Just don't come true
Cause now even I tell
That I confused my feeling's with the truth
Cause I liked the view,Thought you felt it too
When there was me and you..
31 comments:
lovely poem liked the last para..u have all the qualities of a gothic poetess.
nicely expressed !
Miracles could happen..but u shouldnt bank on them.. In other words, never have an expectation that one miracle will happen.. :)
hey dimple...
dil to pagal hai? sure it is and in my opinion wat is d point in living a life which is totally guarded....the more the emotions the more adventurous life gets and more the bumps and yeah baby...you have a basket full of lessons and wonderful experiences in your autobiography to write about...
wonderful piece girl....n soon there will be another 'you and me'....life goes on!! emotions pass...but keep expressing them...you do it wonderfully :)
yeah... two different minds can sometimes picture the same thing, and miracles happen... actually, not a miracle... it is the start of discovery, of love.
neways, very beautiful poem... each line invites for a pause to think and ponder over. beautiful.
btw, even if something's just a dream, to usse dekhne ka paisa thode hi lagta hai! and hope is another good thing, too :)
@ manish : Thank u manishjee
@ajith : Hmm you r rt..but kya karein dil to paagal hai..:P
@Nabila: Ya lets wait and watch..;)
@Wanderer: Yup u r rt 2 like minds can create miracles...:)
Hey Dimple what happened 2 u achanak se? Poeams n all!!!
a nice 1 though
Acha likh leti ho yaar
But y did u loose faith that miracles could happen
They do, only thing is dont expect them every time cause then they wont be miracles
@ashu: waah ashu kya line maari hai.."dont expect them otherwise they wont b miracles"..:)
Beautiful,very well expressed.
you aren't, by any chance, dimple mehta right?
@alapna: thank u so much
@ hershley: nope i m not Dimple Mehta
oh thank god...
well, your poem is pretty good..
one sided love..sigh..its probably worse than havin a heartbreak later..here you don't even get to give it a try...
liked these lines..
You made me feel
Like I could sing along
But then you went and changed the words
@hershley: thanks ..atlast u said sumthing abt the poem...:P
it was awesome.. simple yet expressive.. gr88 going girl
- Madhu
P.S. I was not having patience to create my user account :-)
@Madhu : Thanks dear..:)
Girl....i've alwaz been impressed by your writing skills....now this poetic angle is a feather in the cap for you....time for you to take a bow!!!!
@sonit:heyy thanks yaar..:)
Hey dat was OOSumm!!
@ Aneesha : Just a amateur poet!!
maharah poem chaw trath hish leechmich. kyah wanow. akh akh lafz chu zan zuv chatan
:-) magar, yi os kus lucky/unlucky insaan yemis khatre esyiv toyh melodies gyawaan?
And miracles, they do happen. They are my bread and butter.. keep doin them all the time. Next time u need one, just rub that lamp of urs.
;-)
@ veezee: Thank u thank u..hmmm do need a miracle in life..lemme see wt u will do..;)
mast poem hai dimple ji.....
@kartik : thanku jii..:)
meera liye thoda samajne mushkil tha...uper se chalee gayee...
@akshay: arre kuch bhi nahi samjha..chalo koi nahi..
hmmmm, maina samaja ki aap thoda elobrate karengi meaning ko...per yaha tho ulta hi ho gaya..chalo jitna samja..utna hi kafee hai
buddu..this was jab mera chota sa heart break hua tha..sob i was so sad..that story is with reference to " was he worth even a tear?"..i mean not totally..but thoda bahut..tab se mene scha hai aise sab cheezon mei padna hi nahi hai...phew!!!
kis kameena ne aap ka chota sa dil thoda tha, tell me, i will drown him in arabian sea :-)
and regarding that story- no he was not worth even a tear,
hehehhe..haan haan drown kar dete hain maza aayega..
yeahh he ws not worth even a tear..isliye mene koi tear nahi bahaya..waaah ..thanku thanku
Profound yet so innocent! Well written...
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